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Saturday, March 31, 2012

Improv, Week 10


The 4 o’clock drive thru line at Starbucks on a Sunday afternoon

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Behind the old man with a sixty thousand dollar jaguar, she waits.

Members only jacket, a tire fills with air.

Gritting, his sharp yellow teeth match Ralph Lauren shirt.

She wonders what a man driving a sixty thousand dollar car can be so upset about.    

Later:

The car drinks its own milk, purring and content.

Happy as its owner who doesn’t rush to fill her day with nicotine and energy drinks

Instead, the driver sits deep in the woods of Montana feeding sticks into a fire,

Waiting for the speaker to ask its questions with muffled voice and purposeful pleasantries

She fishes and watches baseball games in dugouts constructed of synapses,

Electrical impulses whisk her away to the Middle Ages- all monk robes, dirty sex, chain link and wood.

An impatient honk forces her up two inches.

Scribbling thoughts as she tosses two ripped dollars into the tip jar, happy to pay for the pleasure of waiting, the man behind the counter wants to appease her

“Busy scribbling, so busy” he remarks. “Oh yes, very busy” she says, relaxed.

and wonders if anyone notices

How warm it is in the car with the afternoon sun beating down through the windshield

Breaking the freezing wind outside

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