Free from Cliche's
The moon was beautifully full, and the stars shone like diamonds in the sky.
"The moon held high above the congregation, large and round as the Bishop's communion wafer. The stars flickered with anticipation like the reflection of the wine in the priest's eyes."
this is what I was getting at today...si o no?
Strong. Perhaps a bit too tied to the church imagery, but it is strong nonetheless.
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