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Saturday, February 11, 2012

Free Entry, Week 4

This was me just writing. I thought the story was going to be about one thing but it ended up taking on a life of its own. Would be interested in your responses - is it interesting to read? Do you think it is a good excercise in writing and leave it at that, or something I should devote more time to revising/making better?

                                                                               Altar 

When Pardon the Interruption replays on ESPN her husband snores. She doesn’t watch much television, but she always keeps the noise on in the background for him in case he wakes up. Spurred by the thoughts of her creative writing teacher, June had gone to the library with her daughter earlier and borrowed some audibooks on CD.  Now she could listen to the classics instead of ESPN.  She takes the CD and presses play. Some milky-voiced narrator reads while a jazzy tune, probably named something like “Sax in the Night” whines in the background. June had always wanted to read the classics. As it was, she loved curling up with her half-collection of Franklin Library books. They were leather-bound and puffy, lined with impressive 24 karat gold-leafed pages. Each book had its own silk placeholder sewn into the top binding and sent shivers up her spine when she folded the bookmarks over and rubbed them as she read.  When she opened them and inhaled deeply, the books smelled 47 - no -  67 years old. She loved the idea of reading them but never had any time. She just carted them around everywhere. She had taken them when her father died, and no one had objected. They knew she loved those books more than the rest of the family combined. She also took the best bookshelf in the whole wide world. Made of cherry wood, it stood about nine feet. When she was a little girl full of daydreams she would stand in front of it and stretch her arms way out. That was how wide it was, and the only way she had ever measured it. It was a simple design. Simple and good. Square, nothing fancy. You can’t find good old-fashioned, hand-crafted, American-made bookshelves anymore. Nowadays it’s all Ikea and Ashley’s Furniture. She thought to herself “particle board had destroyed America.”

                The bookshelf had a cupboard on the left that opened up like a refrigerator, and was about 2 shelves high. When she opened it there were mysteries of years placed slightly out of reach  - old 35mm film, loose rolls of undeveloped film that had expired, and projector slides. Rectangular boxes of slides with the words “Kodak” in yellow sprayed all about. They were mostly of her, when she was a little girl, making mud pies most likely. Old-fashioned flashbulbs and light detectors that were alien and fascinating in her palms peppered the slide boxes.  And games. The old role-playing board games with tons of tiny multi-colored squares of paper, each of which stood for something - probably different types of potions and weapons. One box was royal blue and had a picture of a barbarian on the front holding a club. Another one in a plastic case had something to do with vampires. 221B Baker Street was her favorite. It was a Sherlock Homes who-dunnit game. 

Then there was the hutch. It was right above the cupboard and folded outwards and down to form a shelf just perfect enough to pour a drink on. For as many years as she could remember there was always a bottle of undrunk Brandy in that hutch. It just had to be there, she guessed. Some things just have to be where they are.  The magnets that held the hutch closed were very strong, even after all these years,  and it always took her two tries to open it. Above and to the side of the hutch were the main shelves, the dividers spaced-out just oddly enough to be perfect. That is where the collections lived. The Classics, of course.  Half of them.  Also books on the best museums in the world. Books about fairies, wizards, knights and dragons. Among the collections lived artifacts, like her favorite lead dragon that stood magnificently tiny on the shelf like a powerful chess piece. It usually hung out right next to the generic, apple-green colored leaf-shaped bowl that had a matching lid (which usually covered fragments of old cigars and roaches from smoked joints). When June was in Junior High she discovered she had become quite popular for letting the other boys from the neighborhood come to her house and plunder its contents.

There was a ballerina too who stood about a foot tall. She was a bronze figurine who sat upon a wooden chest, hunched over, always looking down at her shoes, ribbons untied. She was beautiful and mysterious and despondent.  June had always wanted to ask the ballerina what was wrong and give her a hug. Also, she had always wondered why the ballerina belonged to her father – did he trap her there?  Why oh why didn’t June ever ask him?  She recalled her first year in the “gifted magnet” program when the class had read The Indian in the Cupboard. After the class had finished they were given an assignment to write a short story. The assignment was to pick something from home, a plastic doll or other such toy, and make it come to life like the Indian in the cupboard did. June can’t remember what the story was about but she remembers taking the assignment very seriously. And Mrs. Solomon had noticed, telling her mother she had a talented writer in the family. And Mrs. Solomon did not hand out compliments easily. In fact, she didn’t think that Mrs. Solomon cared much for her at all, which made the compliment all the more meaningful.  It was the first time she had really felt talented at anything except being pretty, which wasn’t really a talent at all. And so she wrote. But, she had treated this love just like everything else she had ever loved, finding fault with it however she could and eventually destroying it.  

Despite herself, and in her newest surge of self-fulfillment,  June has returned to this love and she can’t keep the stories straight now. The one about a sitcom. The racing horse. Eggplant parmesan. Fencing crabs. Stories swirl around her as she desperately tries to pin them down. She writes.  

June forgot all about the CD playing in the background. F. Scott Fitzgerald’s “This side of Paradise.”  It was published in 1920 and was, according to the back cover, “considered daring an intellectual in its day.” This was no doubt the line that prompted her to take the story home in the first place. She had also picked up Hemingway’s “The Old Man and the Sea.” She restarts the audiobook from Chapter One.  She thinks about the family who is lucky enough to have that bookcase now, the ones who probably paid 100 bucks for her storage unit when she couldn’t afford that month’s rent and lost her bookcase forever. She hopes it has a good home and wonders if it still has some magic left in it. Maybe, somewhere, it is enchanting another little girl. Or maybe it has been long forgotten, covered by the heap of some garbage dump to decay painfully over time. 

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